Feedback: Rough cut

The rough cut is fairly good, set aside that it isn't muted and we wont be having them sounds in. It needs to be much longer and some of clips dont have no effects or change to them which seems boring unlike the title sequence of arlington road. Also, it doesn't really look like a title sequence since no titles are on it or sound. However we like it so far and, we just neeed to add more effect and more clips. Overall we were pleased with our rough cut, It showed real pontential and progress. The teachers were impressed with our variations of strong bold shots, from the panning of the houses to personal close ups of the captured victim. The different effects makes the sequence edgy and unpredictible. Alot of work still needed to be done including muting the sound, adding music and adding the titles. Also more clips needed to be added.